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.o0OmissthebusO0o. by BluLynes .o0OmissthebusO0o. by BluLynes
...here's another one of my favorite pages in the second issue...
this was fun...
check out the story at [link]
Lines : Me
Colors : :iconsafari-sunset:
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BluLynes Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
HA!!!!!
Come on, give her a break...
She's been outta the game for like 5 years...
She's a bit rusty :laughing:
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mooncalfe Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2010
what, she didn't save the woman's groceries, too?! :XD:
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Atlas0 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
A classic save, nicely done =D
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BluLynes Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanx ^^
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HamsterRage Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional General Artist
great page.

Two big problems:
1. the bus isn't conveying speed. Maybe some speed-lines or a blur to emphasize that.

2. DG's speed isn't conveyed and her swoop leads right into the circular reaction panel, I don't feel like that works or conveys any speed from her... plus again the line it touching the panel border in an awkward way again.
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BluLynes Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Indeed,
I could have added some but I figured it didn't need it. Now that U mention it, it wouldn't have hurt to do so. I think it still works well with out'em...
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SplashColors Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Love this page, bro!

Splash!
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BluLynes Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanx!!!
It would make sense U do...
Great minds think alike
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