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There's little question that you're a solid artist man. but this page's storytelling seems a lil stagnant considering what's going on. It needs more energy. something as little as tossing in a dramatic perspective from birdseye/wormseye view or rotating a panel scene on it's axis or maybe even having some of the rocks in panel 1 shooting off the page & into the next panel or doing a more dramatatic closeup on the final panel. everything is just too one point & leveled out for the energy you're attempting to convey. But as solid a drawing as I've come to expect from you.

God bless!