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I like the piece in general but I think the color scheme can be a little cleaner. The analogous background (pink clouds) and the color of her (the girl in green) energy seem awfully close and the panels can seem a little crouded as a result. Perhaps a different color for the clouds?

All in all its a dynamic piece and the action is fairly clear. I like the posing of the characters and the play between the panels, as if they were getting rocked by the action itself.


anyway just my two cents. Best regards

Sean Jones
Creation Nation